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Poetry
The Plundering of Alice
By Brett
26 April 2008
...and on it goes.

I walked her back to her tatty caravan
She claimed to lusting the drunken, fatter man
I had her up against the balustrade
You should have heard the squeals that Alice made.

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (769 comments posted) 26th April 2008
What have you been sniffing (if you pardon the expression)? 
You've come over all peculiar since you wrote the Coward and Howerd thing!

Written by Brett (1009 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Not too peculiar, I hope. 
 
Cheers
Peculiar?
Written by Katanga (1554 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Ha! Squealing Alice - streuth! On it goes indeed - where will this all end? Who knows, but not too soon, I hope! 
 
The Coward and Howerd thing was simply superband, Veronica, I can't recall if you reviewed 'And Bluebell Lane is now all overgrown' ? It's on my must-read list. After such achievements, I feel some possibly sniffing-induced light banter is most appropriate. 
 
Peculiarer and peculiarer! 
 
Cheers! John 
 

Written by Phil (7014 comments posted) 27th April 2008
Dear god! Poor Alice. I hope you stayed to comfort her through the night and make coffee in the morning. 
 
Phil

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