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Birthday Greetings
By lovelysarah1984
26 April 2008
Inspired by Katang's 'The Bottom of the World' and the reviews thereafter about true greeting card inserts.

My very first post.  My palms are a little sweaty but here goes...

Here's a card for your birthday.
It's all you're going to get.
Because even though I just got piad,
My ends still haven't met.

As I seem to hardly see you,
I thought that this would be enough.
And even if you think it isn't,
It really is too tough!

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (769 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Very good! I think we all want to say this to people sometimes. "my ends still haven't met" is a great line. 
Welcome, and thanks for that very pithy verse.
Gee
Written by lovelysarah1984 (82 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Thank you Veronica. 
Must watch the typing though! Spelling mistakes (my own) make me wince!

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