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| My Eyes' Desire Distorts | |
| By mogli | ||||||
| 26 April 2008 | ||||||
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My eyes' desire distorts as I walk to a lonely chair. My eyes' desire distorts as I walk to a lonely chair. Dark red oak wind their limbs towards the sky. Dark red oak wind their limbs towards the sky. Their oak chair! I desire my lonely limbs to distort? Red wind to my eyes as to a dark sky towards the walk.
Far beyond these walls a sluggish breeze carries the mould. Far beyond these walls a sluggish breeze carries the mould. Leaves a stain on your sheet. Leaves a stain on your sheet. Sluggish sheet carries these leaves on the far walls. A breeze beyond your mould: a stain.
I in a high field, dark corner, marked out well. I in a high field, dark corner, marked out well. Stand in a dripping wait: left Stand in a dripping wait: left Dripping. In a high wait I stand dark. Marked. In a corner. Well out left field.
I to the red sky, beyond high. Distorts the dark. Mould my limbs to red oak. I stand well. Leave the dripping lonely chair in a corner! Walls to field as a wind carries a sluggish stain. Sheet left towards the marked breeze. Desire these far eyes.
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