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Hogs
By Chimera_Crystal
27 April 2008
Heya folks, sorry for the long delay - I'm suffering a period of constipated creativity ;) 

The poem below is just a quicky that came to me one day,  there are so many different ways to structure this - so I thought I'd just post one of my various versions. Let me know what you think :)



Shadows and dark-pale hues, always on a long short fuse
We use and abuse the gears and cogs - leaping in and out like frogs
Those metal hogs, snort and spew in a queue
The many and the few - who knew we could be so blue

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