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Voices
By marchant1219
20 November 2005
Just a thought or maybe just another rambling attempt to make sense of ....

I  believe in you and what you say. My words come as bitter honey.

The expression of my very feeling is lost to my unconventional and simple speech.

What do I say but the very thing I should not.

What do I do but the very thing I should not.

I hear a voice tell me what I should do, but I choose to ignore, only to find that I was incorrect.

Why do we know the right thing to do, but choose not to act only to find that we would have been in a better place if only we followed our own voice.

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Written by Alice (64 comments posted) 20th November 2005
Very powerful sentiments. 
I like it. Life is full of those 'if only's'. 
 
Alice

Written by pure_heartofmine (7 comments posted) 4th July 2006
regret. very simple. very powerful. simply elegant. i love it :) 
 
Jillian

Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 21st July 2006
So true and so well-written.

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