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Touch is All
By msebastian08
29 April 2008


Touch is all

Words alone leave feelings unexpressed
When love is real and live, then touch is best.
My silk-light fingers to your mind connect,
The subtle language of receptiveness
Then racing through you spur the quickening heart
And deep within, the love-rich stirrings start.

Merging senses: smell is taste and sound is sight
Touch is all, skin to knowing skin and sweet delight.
And clever touch tells all of love,
Expressing thoughts, touch, feather-light is delicate.
So later then, mementoes of expressive touch shall be
Perpetual, abiding in the memory.

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Powerful!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 29th April 2008
I can feel the power in this. 
 
One small point: I like the image 'feather-light', bit it's a shame that 'Feather-Lite' is the brand name of a Durex condom, whcich slightly spoilt it for me! 
 
But overall - fantastic! 
 
Cheers! John

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