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I Shall Not Write Another Villanelle ( revised )
By Brett
30 April 2008
Atten-schun! Tongues in cheeks. Quick march!

I shall not write another villanelle
Upon the principle it's not the norm,
The writer puts himself through bloody hell.

I shall now write free verse and therefor tell
Restrictions of the poets that conform:
I shall not write another villanelle.

For such forms house a writer in a shell,
Sheltering from a non-metrical storm
The writer puts himself through bloody hell.

Should every stroke of ink I make rebel,
Thus rendering all my labour now deformed?
Shall I not write another villanelle?

Come you poets where's your rebel yell?
Your sharpened wit? Or were you never warned
The writer puts himself through bloody hell?

Irony has now just rung its bell
And to my shock I've stuck to bloody form;
Shall I not write another villanelle?
The writer puts himself through bloody hell.

Reviews

Written by Veronica_Milvus (769 comments posted) 29th April 2008
Rebel yell! Terrific! 
We look forward to your metrically liberated days.

Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 30th April 2008
Yes, free yourself, while you can, escape the tyranny of every single thought entrained in that incessant iamb beat! Make sure you wear your wet gear, it's rough out there, I'm told ;) . Good luck, brave soul...

Written by Veronica_Milvus (769 comments posted) 3rd May 2008
Yes you bloody shall, boyo! I'm not working my fingers to the bone for nothing. 
 
love 
Alice
Alice, my muse
Written by Brett (1009 comments posted) 3rd May 2008
my dear own, did you not hint the irony that you whispered to me o'er that bottle o' booze? A poet cannot be a rebel without form! 
 
Sweet Alice X

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