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The sound of one stick chopping |
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By andybyers
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30 April 2008 |
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In the parking lot
Soy-stained-useful; discarded:
A single chopstick.
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Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 30th April 2008 | sweet,
and sour.
(groan)
Just a comment about the way poems appear on here.
I think all poems benefit from a bit of space around them, ideally a whole gallery wall of white space would be nice, but to make do...just a few lines of spacing and maybe some indents. Or am I getting too precious? |
Written by coosh (868 comments posted) 30th April 2008 | | I don't think you need the poem - just leave it as the title, à la MangoChutneyman. |
Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 30th April 2008 | drunk late night flurry
the sound of one stick chopping
noodles spill on floor |
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