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Gordon is a W----R
By wt
02 May 2008
Gordon you are a wanker
Go ahead and bury the romantic left
And be done with it through your lame and lucid rancor
And your just about equitable theft





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Written by Phil (7014 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
Why apologise?
Sorry?
Written by Katanga (1554 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
Sorry, wt, but I preferred your last offering. 
 
This reads like one of my own 'fart' poems, which I tend to send off late at night - I realise my folly in the morning and delete them. 
 
I'm not suggesting that you should do the same . . . 
 
But . . .? 
 
Cheers! John
Phil
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
you are right 
 
and made the change accordingly!
Katanga
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
you are a wanker 
;)

Written by Phil (7014 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
Better. As for Katanga - you hardly know him.
Phil
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 2nd May 2008
You are right 
 
Sorry Katanga 
You are probably a wanker 
 
I know I am!
Written by Katanga (1554 comments posted) 4th May 2008
 
Fair enough! I shall bog off to another poem . . .

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