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Written by fellpony
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04 May 2008 |
Help, I have been watching too much snooker.
he's going for a colour
got a bit of
a kick
after that double kiss
it's a touching ball
waggles lead to
a good wrist
cock
and follow through
oh that was a snatch
it's very tight
on the bottom
cushion
he's trying one leg on the bed
should play a deep screw
he can't quite keep that foot on the
floor
he'll need the extension
and after all that
he'll have
to go for a long rest
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No, missus...
Written by Brett (731 comments posted) 3rd May 2008 | ...ah. no, mocking Francis..hmm..thankfully you didn't end up banging the pink with your dusted tip! Foul!
It's that second stanza that really has me creased up.
And how about all those nicknames we have had over the years; hurricane, whirlwind, rocket - that's why they won't last long and need a rest. At least Cliff Thorburn or Terry Griffiths would have lasted all night - they would not have done much, but lasted all night.
Very enjoyable, Sue.
Cheers | strange
Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 4th May 2008 | that this bit of double entendre [filth! Matron!  ] gets one remark, while a description of Appleby Fair gets ten ... |
Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 4th May 2008 | Bum bum - as Basil Brush would say.
Can you imagine the ooing and ahing of the audience.
Enjoyed.
Phil |
Written by Brett (731 comments posted) 4th May 2008 | That's because your title does not promise filth! All the poems that contain penis, vagina (obvious recent titles) have huge hits (careful how you say that, missus) some are worth reading others not so much. But if I were to write a poem dedicated to the sculptures of Michaelangelo
do you think it would get more hits if titled 'Symphonies in Marble' or more if titled 'Muscular Men With Their Knobs Hanging Out' ?
There must be something in it.
Cheers |
Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 4th May 2008 | | Ahh I see it now (please yourselves) ... Fair Hill is equated to Fanny of that ilk | Appleby fair
Written by meadowcroft1964 (100 comments posted) 5th May 2008 | I have stated my apologies concerning my review .So I simplely what to say for what it's worth I have the GREATEST RESPECT for you as a writer and has I don't have the good fortune to really know you it was wrong of me to unleash my insecurities on you. I hope that you will look pass my mistake. The good thing that as come out of this is perhaps we both have had a deeper insight into the others world. GREAT WRITING
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