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Now and Then
By Katanga
05 May 2008

A fragment! To be continued? Worth it? Dunno!

Cheers! John X



Now and Then

You breach the threshold
Of my comfortable world

Now hints of autumn
Hang reckless in your hair
Leave summer impotent
In a winter of despair

Then hints of autumn
Hang reckless in your hair

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Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 5th May 2008
Honestly, don't know either - not much to go on. Loved the first two lines - not keen on the title.  
 
Phil

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