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By Martie2
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22 November 2005 |
I wrote this in my head the day before yesterday: domestic front is a tad rough.
yours
Martin Andrews A November walk, along a country by-way.
Thoughts of you prevail.
Cool sunlight sparkles, through die hard autumn leaves; that cling to the last embers of life.
And even as the pheasant rises, from a golden field, in a flash of colour, my spirit remains:
Within the leaves.
Awaiting the next stiff breeze and gentle drift into oblivion. |
Winters Eve Written by Alice (64 comments posted) 11th December 2005 | I love everything about this piece of work. The title is really apt and every single word you've used 'embers of life' - love it. Also the symbolism of the pheasant (common in fields) like a phoenix rising from the ashes. Somewhere, it seems as though the person who fears their 'gentle drift into oblivion' will rise again. Hope all that makes sense. Keep writing, Martin. Alice |
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