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Winters eve
By Martie2
22 November 2005
I wrote this in my head the day before yesterday: domestic front is a tad rough. yours Martin Andrews

A November walk, along a country by-way. Thoughts of you prevail. Cool sunlight sparkles, through die hard autumn leaves; that cling to the last embers of life. And even as the pheasant rises, from a golden field, in a flash of colour, my spirit remains: Within the leaves. Awaiting the next stiff breeze and gentle drift into oblivion.

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Winters Eve
Written by Alice (64 comments posted) 11th December 2005
I love everything about this piece of work. The title is really apt and every single word you've used 'embers of life' - love it. Also the symbolism of the pheasant (common in fields) like a phoenix rising from the ashes. 
 
Somewhere, it seems as though the person who fears their 'gentle drift into oblivion' will rise again. 
 
Hope all that makes sense. Keep writing, Martin. 
:grin  
 
Alice

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