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Keep Guessing
By Rattle_Spear
23 November 2005
When will we realize; Nobody is perfect!

Who is this astute partisan?

The one in our midst.

 The one who never desists?

The one who never gives in?

The one who never goes away?

 He has his ears to the ground.

 His eyes to the sky.

His vigilance is always sharp.

He is as cunning as a fox!

 He has his colleagues guessing.

 His loved ones smiling.

 His foes retreating.

 His enemies dying!

 What is his goal?

What is his desire?

What is his distance?

Will he also be devoured by the fires of hell?

Reviews
Rattled
Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 22nd November 2005
Text to be upgraded soon....
Wicked
Written by Alice (64 comments posted) 23rd November 2005
This is very deep, but I like the ideas behind the writing. It also seems very introspective, as if it has come from within the chasms of the soul. 
It is certainly gives us something to contemplate. It's actually pretty creepy as well. As if there is a wicked force everywhere, perhaps also in human force. Yes. This is a piece that certainly needs much consideration. 
 
:grin  
 
Alice
Conspiracy Theory
Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 24th November 2005
Yes Alice, 
The NWO keeps us on our toes by night and day while they plot our future. 
Enjoy :grin

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