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Love and Blandishments
By Veronica_Milvus
07 May 2008
A cautionary sonnet for you, girls.

LOVE AND BLANDISHMENTS

Beware the love and blandishments of poets
for you will find they are as other men
except for this – they have a skill and know it
and each will, like a weapon, wield his pen.

With words alone let no man steal your thyme
just keep your garden fair, and lock the gate.
Do not admit the flattery of rhyme
however much they plead or remonstrate.

So what if he’s been writing you a sonnet
to his pure goddess, whom he worships true?
You can be sure he’s spent no time upon it
and other goddesses have heard it too.

Beneath your sacred shrine where love’s flame flickers
he only wants to get inside your knickers.

Reviews
Oh Yes!
Written by Katanga (804 comments posted) 7th May 2008
Superb, as ever, Veronica, and what an ending! 
 
Getting 'knickers' into the same couplet as 'sacred shrine' is deft indeed. 
 
And so true - you've made me come over all guilty! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

Written by Brett (527 comments posted) 7th May 2008
You put us to shame, V. Witty and wonderful. 
I wonder where you get your inspiration. 
 
Cheers
chuckle
Written by fellpony (1519 comments posted) 7th May 2008
This reminds me of Ngaio Marsh observing that actors "emote" to 100% and you don't need to believe they really feel what their characters have to portray.  
 
This is why writers read as the most waspish of antagonists; when annoyed, they do what they do best, expressing thoughts in words.  
 
I love your last couplet. In fact almost all of it :)

Written by wt (137 comments posted) 7th May 2008
wonderful Veronica 
How quaint and cute wonderfully put 
keep up the good work! 

Written by mia_ms_kim (915 comments posted) 7th May 2008
Oh, the idea that the "poet in question" might be recycling his romantic sonnet on woman after woman, is just horrid! How insulting. Maybe they are really doing it. 
Mia :upset

Written by Josie (2535 comments posted) 8th May 2008
Well done Veronica! When you are an "old" married woman, as I am, you don't worry about it any more. ha ha - but I will certainly, in future, beware the love sonnets that come my way. (PS - OPEN TO INVITATION)

Written by Phil (6435 comments posted) 9th May 2008
Lovely (but slightly icky) humour in this Veronica. Enjoyed it very much. 
 
I guess, like most of us, it depends who's doing the versing! 
 
Phil
Icky? No!
Written by Katanga (804 comments posted) 9th May 2008
 
'Knicky' maybe - I simply say again that this is superb! 
 
Cheers Veronica! 
 
Enjoy a sweltering weekend! 
 
John X

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