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By white_lady
23 November 2005

I'm an art student but writing has always played an important part in my work. It's mainly emotional writing that comes from how I'm feeling or someone around me. It doesn't really come into a category, it's just what i enjoy doing and it takes me away from whats really going on around me.


Finding it hard to breathe, feel so down, so cold and alone.

All around me is moving so fast, to slip away and let time go by.

The clock will turn, the world will awaken every sunrise, generations grow and my loves face will turn grey.

But no more will hushed whispers or thoughts unknown haunt my mind; unrest my dreams.

My eyes will no longer see and my ears no longer hear the things that cause this troubled mind to race and speed through a smoke filled room.

Instead pushed out to breathe fresh air again.

To be away from hurt and pains that i havn't even experienced yet.

To be calm for once.

To be at peace.

To feel absolutely nothing at all.

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Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 26th November 2005
White_Lady 
I hope your lack of feeling is due to the cold and not death? 
Your writing is very deep to say the least. 
Well done, I can feel the sensitivity of your soul. 
8)

Written by peeano1 (86 comments posted) 7th November 2006
I don't know what it reminds me of but it reminds me of something. There's deep meaning into your writing although it feels like you're writing about a death wish. Overall, it was good...there are some parts that are a bit overexaggerated but it was good....Good job. Hope to see more of your posts. :)

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