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By Mr_E_Writer
08 May 2008

I'm not a number... I'm an employee with a payroll number!!











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    1:58 - I deliberate which feast shall have priority
    as a mental midget fidgets behind a name badge
    trying to assert his lack of authority.

    I leave him to pontificate and ponder life’s comestibles;
    I know the local Pizza Hut is doing free delivery
    though Tuna or a Cheese Steak are both equally digestible.

    It is 1:59
    and culinary cogitations cloud my mind.

    2 Sub, or not 2 Sub - that is the question
    as buy one get one free day oft plays havoc with digestion.
    Better that, dear friends, than a case of dickey-belly
    courtesy of the high street deli.

    Over lunch I munch and ruminate 5:30
    for when the end is near, I shall face my final carton
    and a hot date with young Donna
    who is stacked like Dolly Parton.



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Written by Josie (2160 comments posted) 8th May 2008
What, exactly, is the work which you have chosen to do in life? It sounds awfully boring - or is it?

Written by Veronica_Milvus (286 comments posted) 9th May 2008
face my final carton! 
 
An utter gem. 
 
Girls called Donna always seem to be trouble, don't you think?

Written by Phil (5986 comments posted) 10th May 2008
Loved the last verse. 
 
I knew a Donna once - Trouble. 
 
Phil

Written by Mr_E_Writer (28 comments posted) 12th May 2008
Josie: I work for DHL. Which is slightly better than working for FED-EX or UPS as that would make me really FED-UP. 
 
Veronica: "Girls called Donna always seem to be trouble, don't you think?" Yes, specially when yer married!! 
 
Phil: Do they do T sized bras? Donna Keebab is Okay!!! 
 
Thank you all - 
 
Eric Wright

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