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| A Minibeast Slug 2 | |
| By Katanga | ||||||||||||||
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Well, this is a more 'considered' piece about our friend the slug! But less-than-fully researched! Hope it works better for children than the last one? Comments? Yes, please! I mean, do slugs attack Hollihocks? Hmmmm! Dunno! Easy to changa if you tell me . . . Cheers! John X
The Slowly Slug If you have learnt about the Slug I'm sure that you will know He has no shoes nor even feet And not a single toe! He hates the sun, and so at night You'll find him on the ground Gobbling up your precious plants And slithering around! He's slimy, so don't touch our Slug, Sticky beyond compare! Just stare at him with due respect He doesn't know you're there! He's blind, you see, and cannot hear So you can dance and sing For all you're worth, but it's a fact He just won't hear a thing! A beer-trap in your garden bed Will make him go away From your best plants, like Hollihocks, We don't want him to stay!
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Just out of curiosity, if he has no eyes or ears (I guess that's why he can't see or hear?), does he have sense of smell? Got a nose? This shows how helpful these children's poems are. Makes us question things we never thought about. Lovely, John. 
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