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By meadowcroft1964
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11 May 2008 |
I really think this is the best i've writen yes or no
To dream of your first gentle kiss
That so wakened your senses
By tender touch of sweet lips
Igniting spark of passion's bliss
Fanning the flames of wildest desire
To sail you through the rivers of lust
Then emerge a fountain of truest love
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Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 11th May 2008 | | Oh - how lovely! |
Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 11th May 2008 | Beautiful. I can't tell you if it's your best since I'm no poet. But I love how you can talk of love and passion with seamless kind of purity. Lovely.
Mia  | Yes!
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 11th May 2008 | I have to say that I think this is truly good.
You ask yes or no. For me, definitely 'Yes!'
For me, it aches so gently of real love.
John |
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