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| An Early Summers Evening... | |
| By Steve_K | ||||
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My hands trembled As I partook to smoke The exhaled breath hung about Like a bird of prey Contemplating, Dismissing The Summer evening Lolled about Deciding against ending It was 7:14 A young woman spied me From a bus I gathered, She gathered My nervous thoughts I smoked another cigarette Straight away Diving deeper inside my head Looking for treasured Witty comments For a greeting It was 7:16 A minute late Had she come at all? My phone gave no clues The Sun still warm I stepped into shade And began to hum Dum, dum, dee, dee An old man approached And looked for the time It was 7:17 The old man, my mind It was then that I caught a glimpse I saw her ‘Fidel Castro’ type hat Bob above the crowd Like a bottle in the ocean Moving from side to side and up I began to walk towards her She saw me, She smiled I could not hide my joy A large grin Relief We closed in Stopped Our faces An arm’s length away A short arm’s length And then I moved in Our tongues met A flame above our heads Australianly, she spoke “Fancy a beea?’ We sank back into the crowd And strolled on
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