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Unaboriginal
By oxfordian
11 May 2008
 

My uncle has moved to Australia.


He says its because of our failure,


To save Britain from mass immigration,


That he flew off to join a new nation.


It struck me as most unoriginal


To be blinded by things aboriginal.

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Written by Josie (2851 comments posted) 11th May 2008
Ha Ha - very funny. I liked your poem but, of course, not the layout.ha ha. They say that there are more leaving than coming at the moment. It's just a change of nationality - saves having a war. Well done!

Written by Phil (7013 comments posted) 11th May 2008
Enjoyed this - raised a smile. 
 
Phil

Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 11th May 2008
What a great irony. Nice one!

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