Stupid Girl - Great Writing Creative Writing Community

Quicklinks:

Great Writing - Home > Poetry > Stupid Girl

READING ROOM

Great Writing - Home

Read and review others' work

Articles on writing

Advice from the community

COMMUNITY

Talk to others in the forums

Events and Competitions

GW News

ABOUT GREAT WRITING

All About Us

WORK AWAITING REVIEW
This list is randomly generated from all our published works. somewhere else by wt Currently Untitled by charlotte A Modern Romance. by DustinBowcott Dakota Diary - Chapter ... by jean.day Bronze Goddess by Snodlander Don't send your baby to ... by punchy Thank the Lord for Allah by wt Dreaming by NancyFrance Side-tracked by beatricelouise Watch the Wall by Katanga

GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.

WHO'S ONLINE
We have 2445 guests online and 4 members online Firefox-Kitsune poeticcrap Josie Katanga

WHO'S ONLINE

Firefox-Kitsune

poeticcrap

Josie

Katanga

Poetry


print friendly version
Stupid Girl

By ReflectingGod

12 May 2008

Just a poem I wrote about how I felt
one day in class. It's a bit rough but, channels my feelings and thoughts well.

It's no one's fault,
But mine.

I should have known better.
Why couldn't I just stay away from you?
Don't lie,Don't answer,
I don't even wanna know why.

I am not perfect,
I have many flaws.
I used to think you were perfect,
But now I see I was wrong.
Pay no attention,
Go off and run.

My anger is being bottled up,
I cry one moment and laugh the next.
I am so sorry,
My mister Hyde is showing.
I can't hate you for long,
Seeing you makes me happy,
I smile every time, every day.
I just couldn't stay away

I am a stupid girl.

Reviews

Written by mr_soul (126 comments posted) 12th May 2008

Rough yes, as the poets on this site will tell you. But I really like it. There's something I really love about poetry that's raw, probably because that's the way I usually write "poetry", or it was anyway, and it always strikes a chord with me. I used to just let the words come out with little thought for anything else. I still do to an extent, though I try to write more with things such as metre and structure in mind. Emphasise on the word try lol.
I think the thing about raw poetry is there is no restriction on what you want to express, the result is usually something which is honest and pure. And for me, this is what this is. You get a good feel for the narrator's angst and confusion and "love" and all the other mixture of feelings so abundant amongst adolescent attraction.
And the last line I really like. Stupid maybe, but if it is stupid then most teenagers are stupid because these are feelings most feel though some do not. For me it ended it well, a lot of room for interpretation.
Well done and keep writing

uh well i dunno...
Written by Daphnerules (28 comments posted) 14th May 2008

why do you say that you are stupid ? I don't think you are if you write like this ! It really expresses you feelings and yes is rough is fells really like sandpaper being read out load as a poem.
Great please review some of my work please
Daphne xx

Only registered users can rate and write comments.
Please login or register.

Previous item		Next item