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How to make Poison
By lovelysarah1984
12 May 2008

It's not a masterpiece but I felt so strongly after someone upset me that this came spilling out in the middle of the night.  I'm sleeping much better now.
I think we all know someone who makes us feel like this sometimes.


  1. Start with just a lie or two and a pinch of deceit.
  2. Add a lot of dignity (including the receipt).
  3. Use up the rest of your pride, the little you have left.
  4. Just a splash of happiness, obtained from others through theft.
  5. Mix in a twisted tongue, we recommend sharp and hard.
  6. Don’t forget the tiny heart, must be black and charred.
  7. The main ingredient you will need to achieve your goal,                                                                                                  Is the discarded shell of an empty and bitter soul.
  8. Now sieve out all the feelings so just the ego remains.
  9. Poor in a bad sense of injustice until the poison complains.
  10. Stir and it should become solid, it should resemble clay.
  11. Mould this into a baby girl, don’t love it, just walk away.
 If you follow these instructions, and it must be to a tee,
Then maybe you can achieve something as poisonous as she. 

Health Warning: This recipe can cause serious indigestion.

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Written by lovelysarah1984 (81 comments posted) 12th May 2008
Apologies for the layout. Still having trouble with the copy and paste on this thing lol! 
Still you get the gist.

Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 12th May 2008
I can see whatever happened, it really got to you. Glad you got it out of your system. 
Mia ;)

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