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Poetry
LOVE (3)
By Mr_E_Writer
12 May 2008

Here's one I bashed out; I hope I've managed to pull it off.






SmileKiss



    
     Love is a rose and a candlelit meal
     being able to tell her the way that you feel
     Love perseveres way past when you're first smitten
     to the point where you sometimes help out in the kitchen.

     Love is making toad in the hole, together
     and when she agrees that she'll dress up in leather
     Love is a dent she puts in your new car
     then making things better in panties and bra.

     To love is to give her all that she desreves
     and not punch her face when she gets on your nerves.
     And to love making kids, cause it's bloody good fun
     especially when she takes one up the shops for some sweets.
  
 

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Good on ya
Written by meadowcroft1964 (96 comments posted) 12th May 2008
Hello  
I think its great. Love is all them things and many more, we could go on for ever. Here is a challenge ,everyone write what love means to them in poetry .It may give some insight into the opposite sex's view .

Written by Phil (6628 comments posted) 12th May 2008
:grin :grin :grin  
 
Do you bash one out every night, Mr E? 
 
I'm sitting here with a broad smile - good stuff. 
 
Love is.....ah. 
 
Phil

Written by Mr_E_Writer (187 comments posted) 12th May 2008
Why thank you, you've made a young southern boy so very happy.

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