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By Mr_E_Writer
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12 May 2008 |
Sorry, there's nothing left of our budget to pay for stage directions.
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"Hissssssssssssss."
"Eat my shorts."
"Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee."
"What's that bursting out of your chest, Homer?"
"SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE."
"Has anyone seen Lisa's saxophone?"
"Doh!"|
Written by criz (28 comments posted) 13th May 2008 | | This one didn't really do it for me. To short and little context. Sorry. |
Written by Livinginanattic (463 comments posted) 13th May 2008 | | Liked the concept, but couldn't quite get where the sax came in. Maybe just me being thick. Worth expanding. | Alien Vs. Bender Bending Rodriguez
Written by Levi (31 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | "Hissssssssssssssssssss."
"Bite my shiny metal ass!"
"Squeeeeeeeeeeee!"
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Maybe I'm missing something. Or maybe there isn't actually anything to miss. Such as context, as criz succinctly pointed out. Copy and paste this comment for the Sooty one, too. |
Written by Mr_E_Writer (192 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | Levi, sorry you didn't like this. Watch out for my next piece "ALIEN V's Predator V's Resident Evil" that will hopefully you will find more appealing.
Or maybe not.
Mr Eric. |
Written by Mr_E_Writer (192 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | Dear Mr Attic. Doh!!
I can only assume that you popped out to make a cup of tea during the most important part, or else you would have seen the part where Homer - convulsed in agony - tears open his shirt to discover Lisa's saxophone chewing its way out of his chest!! I'm surprised that, having missed that part, that you never questioned where the marching band had come from!!
Pay attention, Attic.
Regards,
Eric Wright.
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Written by Mr_E_Writer (192 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | Criz, sorry, I'll try to 'do it' for you next time.
Cheers,
Eric. |
Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | Possibly a good idea, but you don't quite pull it off for me.
Sorry.
Phil |
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