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| In the presence | |
| By mightymoose | ||||
| 16 May 2008 | ||||
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Your feedback is much appreciated. Trying to get better at this. The tipping of a hat, The point is to recognize. A shrug of the shoulders, when trying not to chastise. A finger held to the lips, Hold your wagging tongue! Prancing, gasping, cursing, In the garden where you were stung. A light touch on the arm, As sad eyes look on. Laughing out loud At the obvious con. Wide eyes and mouth, As the surprise is made known. Pink blush of the face As your folly is shown. A sideways glance That is shot your way The wry half-smile Taunting you to play. A wink of the eye Is just between us. Throwing hands in the air, What is all the fuss? A tender kiss on the neck Is enough to make you sway. All the words in the world Just get in the way. Such delicious ideas Words can make you taste. But may it never be Where your presence is replaced.
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