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| A Kiss | |
| By Kezzi | ||||||||||
| 16 May 2008 | ||||||||||
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The first poem I've written in yonkers. Some of it's a bit clichéd, but that's hard to avoid with romantic stuff! Excessive sibilance intended to add to the softness. ^w^ The layout is supposed to mimic how the actions lead to the kiss at the end. Also, I may have used semicolons incorrectly; but I just wanted to make sure they stay alive. Save the semicolon! [: A Kiss A glistening tear Rolls down the cheek; Eyes gleam, wet And knees shake, weak. The softest sigh Warm on the face; Safe, secure In deep embrace. A perfect smile As lips do part; Grow closer as Love grips the heart. The tiny pulse That beats with thrill; Goosebumps prickle In tender chill. A single kiss; And time stands still.
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