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Old Calenders
By maipenrai
18 May 2008
Old Calenders,
out of date
out of time,
much like me self
I be thinking.

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Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 18th May 2008
But even old calendars have their uses, Bernie. Feeling worn out and past it? Chin up! :)  
 
Phil

Written by Robru (125 comments posted) 18th May 2008
Never throw out old calendars, they become new and valid again all too soon. I like it that way being the age I am.

Written by mia_ms_kim (891 comments posted) 18th May 2008
I didn't feel sad about this poem, and I kept wondering why. I think it's because it's in fact cool to be out of date and out of time. With everybody trying to be 'in' with everything, every 'in' thing is becoming tiring, tedius and outdated with blinding speed. 
 
This piece reminded me of the rare individuals who have the ability to stand back a little to observe and perceive and understand, and capture the moments that speed by others. 
 
I thought the old calender was timeless. 
 
Mia 8)
Hi
Written by maipenrai (780 comments posted) 18th May 2008
Phil, Robru, Mia and thanks to you all for your comments. 
Bernie
Old calendars
Written by backstreetdreamer (11 comments posted) 16th June 2008
The best thing about old calendars is that they can bring back the breath of yesterday once again, to be stored in the memories of today. Keith.

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