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A touch of soul ( you and me)
By Daphnerules
18 May 2008
Dancing with the rain drops,
Playing with the sun,
Mingling in the moonlight
A touch of soul

Singing with the dew drops,
Gaming with the songbird,
The day has just begun
A touch of soul

Reading with the thrushes,
Swaying with the trees
Looking with the wind,
A touch of soul


Singing classy music,
Flowing through a dream,
Knowing the unknown
One of all and thee.

It has all become one,
Just you; and, me

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please tell me if u like it
Written by Daphnerules (28 comments posted) 18th May 2008
Please tell me if you like this poem i was up one moring the words really just came to my head i came on GW ASAP and wrote this down flowing ideas as i went 
Daphne xxx 
Please review my many other pieces such as date, **MIST**RAIN**SHINE**RAINBOW** and who drank the herabl tea? please tell me if you like any and what you think 
Daphne xxx :eek :grin :) 8)

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