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By Katanga
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19 May 2008 |
You should have heard her - just around midnight!
Cheers!
John
A Woman for All Seasons
In my duvet covered soft pillowed days
She mocked she laughed she loved me
And always very gently
In my enemy of sleep forever days
I loved her ferociously
But, oh, so very gently
She mocks, she loves,
She laughs with me
And, oh, so gently
In my days of in between
She laughs, she mocks
She loves me
Ferociously
When all our days are ended
All mockery and laughing done
She will be my guiding star
Brighter than the Sun
And take us both to God knows where
But I don’t give a damn
As long as she is with me
As she has always been
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Written by mia_ms_kim (915 comments posted) 18th May 2008 | Sounds like soulmates made for all ages, not just all seasons. What a lovely woman, and how well expressed is the poet's appreciation! Why does this remind of your monkey and whale romance? It's lovely. Mia | Written by Brett (527 comments posted) 19th May 2008 | This is a very tender piece, Tolstoy! You sound a very lucky man. Love that final stanza. Cheers | Written by Josie (2536 comments posted) 19th May 2008 | | Lovely John. She must be very proud to have someone write such nice things about your relationship. Well written. | Written by lovelysarah1984 (80 comments posted) 19th May 2008 | It's really lovely John. It just exudes love in every line. (is that the right word?) Anyway I thought it was great, well done. |
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