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By Caurus
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19 May 2008 |
this was written by me a good amount of years ago, for reasons i care not to discuss.
take care
Thats all it read.
her other words like her were dead.
dont leave me here I begged her corpse
and every moment since has barely toutched
this stale exterior that needs its crutch.
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Wow!
Written by Livinginanattic (454 comments posted) 19th May 2008 | This is very moving, and I can't help feeling intrigued. There are some punctuation and spelling errors but don't worry, you can work on those. You've got the important stuff right and written a very powerful poem.
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