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Poetry
Sugar lips
By Caurus
19 May 2008

If it does not speak for its self i wouldnt know anyother way to explain it.



Only sugar does this;

Sticking to my lips.

Need to get it off

Its taste makes me sick.

But I’m so fat.

I’m so hungry,

I’m so ugly when I’m with sugar.


Sugar is gone by the morning

But I craves a taste of something

to stop my insides moving.

I am disgusting,

Choking on sugar,

Choking each other.

I just cant eat today

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Written by Livinginanattic (454 comments posted) 19th May 2008
Really good poem Caurus, and something a bit different. You've conveyed the feelings of self-disgust very effectively. The rhythm is unforced and I like the subtle rhymes you've used.  
 
Cheers, 
Ben

Written by Josie (2533 comments posted) 20th May 2008
Yes, I guess writing a poem on self-disgust is rather different. Why did you write it? You wanted it to speak for itself, but why? Are you seeking help for I think that someone who thinks of themself as disgusting seriously needs help. What do you recommend others, who feel the same, should do? Lots of questions.

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