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LOVE HURTS
By Mr_E_Writer
20 May 2008





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Sealed



   Love hurts - as reflected in the tracks of my tears.
   From the purple welts upon my cheeks
   to the tracks of your nails that claw my back,
   Love hurts.

   The subtle strokes from a riding crop, electrical cable or flex.
   Bedsteads and broomsticks, blinfolds and handcuffs,
   "O" the joy of sex!
 
   Her kinky boots' stiletto heels leave holes in yearning flesh,
   I'm never satisfied unless my buttocks are a mess.   
   And when I miss the wetlook smile of my dominatrix's lipstick
   I get supercalifragilistic-sadomasacistic.

   Love hurts!


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Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 25th May 2008
supercalifragilistic-sadomasacistic - worth the read for that alone. 
 
Phil

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