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A Response to Josie
By awakenedmind
20 May 2008
Well I have tried!

awakenedmind
aka
Michael

Here’s a poem to show the way of how to have a really good day

The weather can be wet or fine but never will I show that I really mind

A smile and a wave will always prevail, as I walk to work within the hail.

The sun comes out with vitamin ‘D’ a really good chagrin


No colleague of mine will get me ‘down’, as today I will not frown

They will look as though I’m daft as I carry on my cheery chat

The day flows fast and the work gets done as we all just carry on

The customers note my cheery face and they all say that we are ace


Problems come and get resolved a positive smile is all it takes

A smile is a magnet as it attracts a positive outlook all over the place

A smile is only half of what is required, as a heart full of love never tires

So there you are that’s all you need a smile full of love within your face.

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Written by Josie (2772 comments posted) 20th May 2008
Ha ha - you're on the right trail now Michael. Keep going. Take a copy of Loach the Roach in your pocket to show to those who are getting you down/. That'll make them laugh. Best wishes - liked your poem.
Here! Here!
Written by Katanga (1179 comments posted) 20th May 2008
What more can I say? 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

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