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Tommy Ginger Puffs
By Rattle_Spear
29 November 2005
Fate brought him..... Destiny took him.....!

The storm was brewing

On that Saturday night

That's when the little ginger kitten took to flight

He ran and ran in the rain

Trying to get away from the thunder and pain

He lost his way and into harms way

The unfriendly cat did not bid him stay

Instead it happened what he most dread

He was assaulted rather than offered a bed

The big tom saw him as a threat

He wished him away and rather dead

He ran into my arms and away from fear

I warned mister brown not to come near

 

I took him in and gave him shelter

 

I Pacified Tommy and gave him dinner

The little ginger puffs was far from a sinner

It took seventy-two hours to solve the story

Along came his mistress in all her glory

She claimed the little soul and took him away

No more in my arms to play

My door is open and his foods on the stove

That is only if little ginger puffs decides to rove

 

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Interesting
Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 13th December 2005
Dear Rattle_Spear, 
 
This an interesting piece with an equally interesting content but one thing I might consider is adding a little puntuation to a) help with the reading and b) to make certain lines stand out. If I was you, but of course it's your decision, I would certainly consider looking at this. 
 
Tommy
Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 15th December 2005
Dear twriter 
Thanks for the advice. 
I prefer to keep it original. PS I write 4 minute poetry and try not to fill in the gaps later. 
I enjoyed your crossword puzzle... 
:)  

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