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I don't love you (I'll never will)
By ReflectingGod
21 May 2008
True story.
But this version is nicer.

I shouldn't have said anything,
I should have let those wolves devour you,
If I didn't do anything at all we wouldn't have this situation.
You mistaken my kindness for love.

I believe I've told you before...
That I would never like you that way.
You didn't listen and it was your own fault.
Never mine.

I knew better, who you would become.
A creep, a monster, a vile sadistic loser.
I tried avoiding you, not speaking too.
I never gave you false hope.

You tried to trick my friends, you tricked yourself,
Believing that I would ever love someone like you.
I don't know why you won't give up,why you just won't die.
How many times must I glare, snarl and rave?

I should have never helped.
I should have never come into contact with you.
But I just couldn't stand by and watch the torture.
I had to make them stop, the suffering couldn't go on.

I just had to,
I shouldn't have done so,
I wish you would learn,

I don't love you.






Reviews
Frightening
Written by meadowcroft1964 (112 comments posted) 21st May 2008
He or is she sounds dangerous 
Keep well away
Re: Frightening
Written by ReflectingGod (30 comments posted) 21st May 2008
Yes, I try to stay away. 
I am grateful that I have friends who protected me from Him.
good
Written by katejayne (18 comments posted) 6th June 2008
just one tiny incy error,  
 
its: "you mistook my kindness for love" 
or  
" have have mistake my kindness for love." 
 
Haunting read. 
 
powerful and atmospheric
Written by kevinrobson73 (434 comments posted) 20th November 2008
obviously heartfelt and very real 
glad you're safe and have good friends

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