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A Chocolate Bullet

Shot him in the head,

Yes, shot him dead.

But now if only I had not the sticky

sensation on my hands,

Nor the sweet smell of it within my nostrils,

Trickling through my fingers.

I lick it

and wish –

Wish, that it were chocolate.

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Written by Canadian_Bacon (114 comments posted) 21st May 2008

Grim. Very grim indeed.

I don't have any suggestions...I think it's good as-is.

brrrrrrr
Written by fellpony (1659 comments posted) 22nd May 2008

Very grim indeed.

Written by BenC (11 comments posted) 12th September 2008

WOW.

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