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News Today!
By Katanga
23 May 2008

Sorry, I get angry sometimes . . .

I don't know if a 'poem' is appropriate here, but I just rushed it off.

Comments more than welcome!

No, seriously, I feel I'm a 'poet without a cause' . . .

Does anyone need one?

Cheers!


John


News Today


Did you see the news today
About a girl aged seven
Starved to death apparently
Gone, do you think, to Heaven

Or Hell or whatever’s out there
There can’t be anything worse
Than what she wasn’t seen to go through
In all the Universe

She died a slow and lonely death
We gather from the press
A sad and deprived family
Grim, none the less

Her sisters are all in hospital
On life-support machines
Let’s wish them well together
Whatever in Christ’s name that means

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News Today
Written by awakenedmind (48 comments posted) 23rd May 2008
A piece for today which will be relevant tomorrow as well (unfortunatley) 
It said everything 
It hit the right spots 
It has to be compulsory reading if only to bring awareness 
which it does far better than any newspaper! 
 
Well Done 
 
awakenedmind 
aka 
Michael

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