To review more work I must not shirk

Some are good some well just don’t work

I know what I like as some can see but not all will agree

Comments made with good intent will leave us all just content

Comments made to pierce the heart will make us leave this dying art

Comments then are just my view and not necessarily all that true

I work hard to improve my grammar but simplistic verse is my manner

I try to see just what you mean but sometimes it goes over me.

A ‘polished work’ is something I try, but also I have to see the reason why

Simplistic ways to tell a tale will sometimes help to raise the veil

To that hidden world of words and grammar reaching out to those that clamour

Never taught or shown the way simplistic verse can make your day

I want to learn as I’ve lots to say as I go on my way today

I will listen and I will reason but never will I be forgiven

If I give up now and hide away and loose all that I have to say

So I’ll learn from all those here who care to teach without no fear

So criticism I shall take upon the chin and grit my teeth with a grin

I’ll again learn what to do and hope that I won’t disappoint you