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Not very paltry.... Written by tat_2man (56 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
If this is paltry I would hate to go against you in a competition. I especially like "So down he laid his life for free For a maiden he never had". Good job. |
Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
who is dead? You, pj or Brett? and what grisly fate is going to befall the others? go home and take up knitting chain mail, it's safer than fighting. |
Good Question! Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
Ha! That is the question! I shall send you a pm about this shortly (no offence to your stature meant!), since this is all getting rather nonsensically sensitive! Ho! Cheers! Your Weeping (K)night? Where's the spider? No, that's Arachnia. I am at home, actually, 'knitting chain mail' - a marvellous image for 'writing angry poetry'. Love it! Ha! I weep yet again . . . J K T |
Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
Quite nice, Tolstoy, but I am sure whoever died would have bothered even in knowledge of the forthcoming nonsensical fuss otherwise he would not have been gallant. Nice piece. Cheers |
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
| Do you know - I'm crying in my hanky for this gallant lad. Ooooh!!! Poor little sod. I don't think they'd lay their life down today for a maiden. Do we still have any maidens? I can't imagine putting that name to those rolling round the towns drunk on a Saturday night. So, are we finished then with mini-beasts or just taking a well-earned break? Now, back to grasshoppers, scorpions, beetles and all things crawling. Goodnight! |
Dear, Josie Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
| Just because a Knight is drunk does not mean he is not gallant. I've been on some very gallant drunken nights! |
Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
| Brett, I could make an answer to your comment but I decline, being a blushing maiden myself. |
Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
Believe it or not, this helped me understand VM's poem better! Coming from a different culture, the medieval images in VM's poem confounded me. After reading this piece, I could 'see' what her poem was about! Gallent indeed. This was fun! (At least this guys was a gallant WESTERN loser, if he was a Japanese SAMURAI's 'falling on his sword' would have been far more gruesome.) Mia |
Not I Written by patterjack (1194 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
Am I missing something ? Not my own existence -- to the best of my knowledge Believe me I have every intention of fighting off that long night -- gallant suicide is oxymoronic to me patterjack |
Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
patterjack's precise profundity. Couldn't agree more. Cheers |
Hypothetical Horror! Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 23rd May 2008 |
Brett, PJ - thank you! The suicidal horror here is purely hypothetical - I would truly hate to lose either of you two chaps. And I'm not shuffling off the mortal coil of GW in a hurry! I suppose I am trying to say: Let's screw our courage to the sticking post. (what on earth?!) Cheers! John |
Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 24th May 2008 |
Did this by any chance begin (after VM's original tale) with the old Scots folk song, "The Four Marys" - "Last night there were four Marys; Tonight there'll be but three. There was Mary Beaton and Mary Seaton And Mary Carmichael and me." ? I kept hearing echoes of it. |
Four Marys! Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 24th May 2008 |
Ah, fellpony! You've sussed it! My opening two lines are a direct 'take' from the traditional Joan Baez song which you quote - I was wondering if someone would pick it up! As I recall, the king (the highest Stuart [steward?] of all) has his wicked way with her and she gets pregnant and into disgrace. Abortion not being an option in those days, she has the child and tries to 'get rid of it' in the the most heart-rending way . . . " I put him in a tiny boat And cast him out to sea That he might sink Or he might swim But he'd never come back to me." The king passes by haughtily on his horse and feels bad about all this and tries to rescue his conscience by pardoning her . . . "Well hold your tongue my sovereign leige And let your folly be For if you'd a mind to save my life The gallows I would not see." [slightly misquoted I think!] And so on - one of my all-time favourites. I can russle up the rest of the lyrics if you like? But I guess you know them backwards?! Cheers Sue! John X |
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