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By no1butClo
03 December 2005
teenage angsty stuff: "move along people, nothing to see here"


Help me.

Talk to me

about something,

anything.

Just stop messing with my head,

burning me,

fueling the hate I thought I'd

left behind

(save my salted dreams).

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Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 3rd January 2006
Why post it and then tell us it's teenage angst and not to read it. You are right, it is teenage angst, but why not tuen it into something worthy of your skills? 
 
If not, why bother to clog up the review board with wasteful words? 
spidey

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