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| Naiad of the Bath | |
| By patterjack | ||||||||
| 29 May 2008 | ||||||||
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Based on a painting I saw long ago. And praise be, not a sonnet ! Those poor nymphs and naiads -- never a moment's peace from salacious satyrs , sexy shepherds , and the grasp of lusty gods! I thought she deserved a little time for once in a bathroom by herself ! The one I noted in the painting was worth peeping at , though ! Naiad of the Bath. Slowly she unfastens the high- girded zoster, turns and gracefully looses her monochiton that covers the pearly beauty of her flesh. Here she has the luxury of her mirror with its undistorted image of her body free of the ripples in her maidens' spring . A long slow turning study of herself and then, with languorous and dainty step she glides to be embraced by the waters of her bath; back now to a differing element she returns, sinuous in the water's steamy warmth. The scented flowers and oils disposed around the deep tub's rim sit waiting unneeded as enhancements of her beauty. Relaxing, she can dismiss the satyr's constant gaze, for there are no friendly shrubs and bushes here to conceal his salacious leer and capering lust, and peacefully free of his pursuit she drowses. Later she will arise and with fresh linens rejoin her sisters by the colder stream; perhaps to enjoy there the amorous wooing of some passing god, or even of Zeus himself.
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