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Water of Life
By Veronica_Milvus
29 May 2008
There's a booze thing going on at the moment, (again) with Brett's Martini verses (I tried one, Brett, and I was legless before I could finish it) and Phil on the Asda so-called "whisky".  Here's my hymn to the single malt.

WATER OF LIFE

Catch me a fragment of a Highland stream
through heather moor, let percolate and fill,
mix with malted grain and copper's gleam,
warm with peaty fire, and twice-distil.

Age it in a cask of solid oak
in patient caverns let it breathe, and rest.
The amber aromatics, let them soak
and bring me Scotland, as a nectar pressed.

Inhale the honeyed accents of Speyside
Dalwhinnie, the Balvenie, Aberlour;
the lowland Auchentoshan, from the Clyde;
into Edinburgh crystal, let it pour!

Take a packet steamer to the Isles
to Jura, and to Orkney's Highland Park.
Talisker's brisk smokiness beguiles
from under brooding Cuillins, subtly dark.

But let me stay by choice in Islay's arms
the tang of Bowmore - bonfire on a beach!
Laphroaig, Ardbeg, Caol Isla's breezy charms
Bruichladdich's lemon, lime and peach.

And here before me, luscious to behold
untouched by water from our English rain,
Lagavulin, sixteen summers old
my heritage, returned to me again.

Reviews

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 29th May 2008
Lovely, Veronica. The only thing I can take issue with is the Islay malts. Every one I've tried leaves me with a TCP afterburn! Not pleasant really - but each to their own, eh? 
 
You mentioned 'hymn' in your intro - that describes this perfectly. 
 
Very much enjoyed. 
 
Phil.
Elixir of Life!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th May 2008
Aha! 
 
I, personally, hope the 'booze' topic won't go away - there is such celebration and such tragedy to be had from it. 
 
Here, the celebration is perfect - and as a 'reply' to Brett's wonderful Bombay Sapphire piece, just as perfect. 
 
I only have a humble glass of red to fire me up . . . 
 
Tell you what - I'll try one of yours, then hit GW . . .  
 
Beware! 
 
Still weeping! 
 
Tolstoy
Well well
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 29th May 2008
A kindred spirit at last !!  
 
I have never lost the appreciation of the Lagavulin Lift that I got when given several different tasting bottles by my son on his return from Scotland -- ll the big peaty L was the far out winner !!  
 
And anytime anyone wants to donate to my cellar .... 
( but with lots of red , white wines , and Metaxas 7 star brandy too ! -- that's the Greek connection ! ) 
 
No further comment needed on the hymn , or perhaps more , the Ode 
 
patterjack

Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 30th May 2008
Ah, the Islay malts. Now you're talking. 
Enjoyed this very much (nice to see Caol Isla getting a mention - too long overlooked that drop). And 16 year old Lagavulin - nectar. 
Metre and rhyme both flow effortlessly - a little like the whisky! 
 
Cheers

Written by Robru (272 comments posted) 30th May 2008
I'll have a laphroaig every time. A beautiful poem to set mind in order to anticipate the taste. Pity I can't afford it.
Wonderful!
Written by Bagheera (685 comments posted) 30th May 2008
I hope you won't mind me forwarding a copy of this to my 85-y-o father, who "collects" malts and has often praised Lagavulin above all others ........ :grin  
 
This is one of the very few things my father and I cannot agree on, as I have developed a preference for ANY of the Irish whiskies. with 18-y-o-Jamesons' [ :eek YES, it really DOES exist!!] as unrivalled for taste and smoothness. There aren't a lot of Irish brands to choose between, of course, so the Scottish market is safe for the time being (I'm not counting the poteen stills in the calculations, for obvious reasons ........ :grin )

Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 30th May 2008
Glad you liked the poem, thanks for your reviews. 
 
Ther were a few lines about bourbon (Woodford Reserve, by choice) that didn't fit in there, so they may have to be pursued separately. 
 
Phil - for a very different Islay, try the Bruichladdich 12 year old, with the pale blue label, as described above! not at all phenolic and very summery. 
 
I must have tried 50 different malts and Lagavulin is the one I keep coming back to!

Written by coosh (923 comments posted) 30th May 2008
Beautiful poem. With a certain high-brow commercial distillery cum tourist board potential. Frequently ended up chasing the heavy with Tomintoul - but you're right about Lagavulin. Delightful.

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