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Bach's Boy and the Bassoon
By patterjack
31 May 2008
Dashed off while listening to Johannes Christian Bach's Concerto for the Bassoon in B Flat Major. A lot of fun from Bach's baby son!

Bach's Boy and the Bassoon  

The fat man bounces jollily  along
With now and then the admonitory display
of a wave with wiggling fingers at the throng
of ladies gliding around him on his way ;

and all his rounded plumpness of silhouette
that casts an ovoid shadow on the ground
does not restrict his occasional pirouette
or high heel clicks, or his elastic bound.

Less slapstick version of the red-nosed clown,
he follows his own roly-poly course;    
a skipping balloon that occasionally drops down
but rises again with irresistible force.

Would that I could such strategies employ
to express myself with such easy bubbling joy!

Reviews

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 31st May 2008
I think it is one of the most difficult things to do; to describe music in terms of words.. Words have to be filtered through the mind before they make an emotional impact but music gets that "gut" reaction and hits the emotional button immediately. 
I think this is as close as anyone could get to putting it across. I love the images you use which get to the heart of the music.  
Talking about "transcendent cadences" etc never really make you feel the music like you have here. 
I do think you must really know and love the music to be able to express it in the right way, which ,I'm guessing, you do 
cheers 
jane

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 31st May 2008
Back to sonnets then? 
 
Much like the above - you've managed to portray a feel for the music - and particularly as it applies to you. I wonder if Bach Junior was thinking the same thing? 
 
Enjoyed this, Brian.  
 
'Would that I could such strategies employ 
to express myself with such easy bubbling joy!' 
 
I normally find alcohol helps. 
 
Phil
Can't get away...
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 31st May 2008
... from the damned things, Phil. Maybe it is a sort of disease. 
 
But it's a fun piece of music, and the role played by the bassoon is a bit different from the usual, at least in my experience  
 
Jane, dance drama as a means of expression is something that facilitates the building of the images ( bit like programme music , though as someone who cannot read a note , I would not really know!) 
 
Thanks to you both . 
 
patterjack 
 
 

Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 31st May 2008
For some reason I can't get away from the image of an animation cartoon character of a happy rotund orchestral conductor, who is taken up with leading his orchestral band, lost in the world of his music making. It does look so jovial and easy, thinking of the creation of human imagination. Perhaps we can conduct our lives that way, too. Hmmm... 
 
Mia 8)

Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 1st June 2008
Nothing wrong in Obsessive Compulsive Sonnet Disorder - worked for the bard! 
 
Liked this! 
 
Cheers
ta Mia / Brett
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 1st June 2008
Mia , that comment took me back to the very early days of B/W cartoons 
I think there must have been a bit of that image in my mind 
 
Brett, it canbe annoying- I have to break myself away from the form , deliberately , often with forced results  
And I am no bard ! 
 
Apologies to those who see the basic image as a bit trite when allied to bassoon music-- I don't always see that fat man image !  
 
patterjack 
 
 

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