Tonight
Tonight is the night,
That I turn all my
Wrongs back to right.
Tonight is the night,
In which I make all
My pain feel alright.
Tonight is the night,
That I stop the fight.
This internal conflict
Has killed me inside.
The thing that has
Brought this emotional torture,
Now will be the end of it for sure.
I have figured it out,
Whether I should live or die.
And tonight my good friend
I have chosen to say goodbye.
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Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 1st June 2008 |
It's tempting to say a review at this point may be superfluous.
If this is a cry for help, you need to seek it out - and fast.
Phil.
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Apologies
Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 1st June 2008 |
That seems a little abrupt.
Maybe this will help:
Samaritans USA
PO Box 5228
NY 12205
ALBANY
New York
Helpline 1: (51 689 - HOPE (4673)
Website: www.timesunion.com/communities/samaritans/
If your piece isn't serious - then no damage done. |
Written by Mr_E_Writer (225 comments posted) 1st June 2008 |
Phil: I don’t think you need to worry too much. This just strikes me as someone going through their angst stage.
Loser: As you suggested, I paid a visit to your MySpace entry. I feel that I must now ask you, High School Musical or High School Massacre?
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Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 2nd June 2008 |
| I agree with Phil wholeheartedly. This is perhaps one of the most terrible poems I have ever seen on Gw and I would also urge the writer to get some help immediately. Thank you so much Phil for the address. |
Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 3rd June 2008 |
No harm, I promise, those times in my life are far gone!
Phil: I have never even seen high school musical, does that answer your question? lol ^_^ |
Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 3rd June 2008 |
| Sorry, wrong person, Mr e writer. =] |
I love you
Written by ReflectingGod (30 comments posted) 4th June 2008 |
| I like this poem chel, like all your writings. |
Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 4th June 2008 |
| Thanks em, love you too!!! i'm going to read yours rigth now |
Help?
Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 5th June 2008 |
I am so fucking tired of people telling me I need help!
This is writing for god sakes! You don't know me, nor do you care. Get over yourselves, and stop trying to look like upstanding citizens, you don't fool anyone. I am sorry my poems aren't about rainbows and butterflies! |
Josie
Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 5th June 2008 |
| Josie, how dare you accuse me of sexual activitys when I said nothing of the sort, then question my mothers abilities on raising me,and say that poem is terrible? |
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