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| Poem at Dawn | |
| By Katanga | ||||||||
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Couldn't sleep! I know the rhyme and meter are a bit clumsy at the end - can I get away with saying it's intentional? Comments on improvements more than welcome! Sleepless John X
Elusive memories on the rise Like starlight in our children’s eyes Remind me of the day to come Of love gone by and left undone Dazzled dreams that lie unspoken Forgotten love that sleeps unwoken Startled thoughts that fly unheard Requited by the written word Where are they then I hear you say I tremble at the break of day I gather them all together now Weave them up and still somehow I owe you more than I can pay Love you now so urgently As this sleep-defying sudden dawn Folds all her stars away
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