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| Forever chapter 5 for young adults | |
| By jennistar3 | ||||||||||
| 01 June 2008 | ||||||||||
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here's chapter five, a supernatural romance. Like it so far? It's getting to an action(y) bit in the next chapter, it's just character development or this chapter. But hopefully it's still good and you like the characters jennifer x Alsyn "I'm home," I yelled into the hall as I went to go to my room and get changed.
"We're in the kitchen!" Sarah yelled back excitedly. I heard her giggling and talking, it sure wasn't Mary unless she'd had a sex change on the way home from work. I heard Sarah giggling; she was in her flirting mode. She was being overly girly, which just wasn't her. I dropped my bag on the floor and got changed out of my wet clothes (don't ask. Some idiot with a Slushie slammed into me, I had to walk home with blue hair and clothes, which earned me some weird stares on the bus...) being careful not to get any more of the blue gunk on my hair or anything else.
"Hey" was all I managed to say. He smiled his huge wide smile at me and pulled a chair out for me. As I was sitting down, I couldn't stop staring at him. He looked exactly the same as the last time we'd ever spoken. He was still smiling that same smile that lit up his face at me and I couldn't help but smile back at him. He tilted his head and looked me over.
The last person to join our little family was Will, the brains of the team. Anyway, it was like the Anthony I knew had come back instead of the angry jerk that I'd seen walking away from me that day. Sarah sat beside us. We talked and laughed for hours it was like old times. I wanted to stay like that forever. I never realised how much I'd missed him, and now he was right here. There were so many questions I wanted to ask him, but I had no idea where to begin. He seemed to notice this. "So how've you guys been?" He said shrugging his shoulders. Sarah answered first. "It's been really boring without you," she said smiling and brushing her hair past her shoulder. Most Guys would melt with that move but he seemed oblivious. Sarah's shoulders dropped and she looked past him. I decided to plug the growing silence. "I've joined university. Literature and history. You always said I needed to get out more so...." "You did? That's great," he said. Mary decided she wanted to join in with the conversation this time. "What about you. You've been gone a while anywhere exciting?" She asked, leaning on the table. "I went back home for a while, things have died down though, we can go outside and mix with ordinary people now, no pitchforks in sight" he joked. Remembering the last time, we were there, with the Beniandante. "I never did get to apologize for that," he said. "That's because we were all running for our lives at the time" Sarah said, "It was a log time ago now, lets start a clean slate, its been too long." "Sure, I just wanted to clear the air." "Consider it cleared" Sarah replied.
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