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I Love to Hold You
By PoetPaul
03 June 2008
 I love to hold you,
My hands are open wide,
To feel your smoothness 
And taste you deep inside.

I peel back your covering
And, to my great delight,
Am greeted with a most
Delicious, beautiful sight:
 
Chocolate, in all your glory!
Mmm, I lightly lick my lips
Anticipating satisfaction
As you melt on my fingertips. 

You exude a special richness
That almost drives me insane;
An exquisite delirium
Assaults my eager brain.

I crave to have you near me
Each and every day;
I must get my daily dose –
You tempt, and I obey.         

Reviews
Sex and . . .
Written by Katanga (1497 comments posted) 4th June 2008
. . . chocolate! A deliciously gooey poem! 
 
The scanning's a bit rough in places, but I'm certainly guilty of that too! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

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