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Poetry
Beautiful Inside
By PoetPaul
03 June 2008
Appearances can be deceptive,
And to the superficial gaze
The outside seems dull and grey
Plain looking in many ways,
Yet, when a crack causes
Water to seep slowly through,
A Geode can split to reveal
A dazzling sight to view!
Piles of purple crystals
Sparkling in the light,
Such wonderful inner beauty
Now apparent for our delight! 

Have you noticed how some people,
Like a Geode, may seem plain as plain can be?
Yet, if we take time to peer deeper,
Then, what gems would we see!
Perhaps a beautiful heart
We never thought was there,
Where an aching generosity 
 
Is waiting its time to share?
Yes, a warm, glowing inner beauty
Will emerge before your eyes,
A newly discovered Treasure
For you to cherish, and to prize!   

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BEAUTIFUL
Written by meadowcroft1964 (112 comments posted) 3rd June 2008
Inspirational truly beautifully written

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