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Poetry
Tree-ness
By hebe
04 June 2008

Hopefully this makes you grin or chuckle and maybe even rejoice a little in tree-ness.Smile


                  Tree/ Tree/ Tree/Tree,

                                 Tree/ Tree/ Tree/Tree,

                                 Tree/ Tree/ Tree/Tree,

                                              When I

                                              Look Up

                                              At Thee

                                              And See

                                               Beauty
                                              And Hear
                                             
You Sing
                                                To Me, 

                                                How I

                                             Love Thee,

                                       Tree, Tree, Tree.

Reviews

Written by Turquoise-Tangerine (223 comments posted) 4th June 2008
 
Leaf it out, hebe. You need to branch out.

Written by shirley_keeldar (67 comments posted) 4th June 2008
You had the desired effect with me, I laffed a little! 
 
L :grin
Chortled!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 4th June 2008
There's something about this that made me laugh out loud with delight. 
 
Still chortling - love the 'concrete' form. 
 
Nice one! 
 
Cheers, hebe! 
 
John X

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