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Hubris and Nemesis
By Katanga
04 June 2008
Nemesis normally falls from above . . .

Here, the Gods are in the Underworld . . .

Ho!

John X


Hubris and Nemesis


Some of us write
in a room for a few
hope for a kind word – 
a supportive review

Some see their poetry
etched in the skies
where poems are written
with stars in their eyes

I have seen many
surely not all
scaling the face
of their late night call

From what giddy heights
will Hubris fall?
From what dark depths
will Nemesis rise?

These are questions to ponder
that need no reply
as long as I’m with you
under a darkening sky.

Reviews
No reply, but...
Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 5th June 2008
It's sometimes easy to forget we've all got our own agendas on here...what type of poetry we want to write and read, our definitions of poetry and what it can be, how our different experiences and worldviews affect our interpretations.  
 
The reasons we write and what we hope to get from it are all as varied as life itself.  
 
Little groups of mutual appreciation will naturally form but hopefully nobody will be left alone for too long (unless they're blatantly obnoxious arseholes of course ;) . Sorry, I was just getting too lovey dovey.

Written by Canadian_Bacon (110 comments posted) 5th June 2008
"Some see their poetry 
etched in the skies 
where poems are written 
with stars in their eyes" 
 
^^^My favourite part. 
 
Once again you have created a great poem without the use of cryptic metaphors. Bravo!

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 5th June 2008
Nathan makes a good point. We all use GW for different things and in different ways - and not just the poets. 
 
Little groups etc...... yes, but I would hope they remain honest. Groups form more from mutual respect than admiration. They are not quite the same thing.  
 
As far as nemesis goes - I hope to push mine further away every time. 
 
Phil
Respect!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 5th June 2008
Thank you all, Rob, Mike and Phil! 
 
I was just annoyed by a bit of arrogance that popped up lately. 
 
I found it intimidating, though luckily not to me personally, to the extent that I posted this perhaps rather unwise piece. 
 
I hope you get my drift? 
 
I'm not usually like this . . . 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 5th June 2008
John, it is doubtful if you will get a response from the elitist few to your poem, but for the rest of the writers here, what you have said is correct. "Arrogance" is the correct word. What Phil has said, and he has noticed it also, is absolutely correct and I have to agree with you all. It is a pity but there it is. Canadian Bacon is also right, but coming down to earth is hard for some of them.

Written by mia_ms_kim (976 comments posted) 5th June 2008
I thought this was quite beautiful as well as humourous. The fall of the Hubris, and the rise of the Nemesis - what a thought! There is so much of the romantic in you, John. I wonder if there are poems you've written but don't share it??? 
 
Mia 8)
Sorry! No. Josie!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 5th June 2008
 
Sorry to say this, Josie, but I think you've got me wrong this time - my fault for trying to be 'clever-clever'. 
 
Ha! 
 
This celebrates the 'elite few' ( NOT 'elitist' - no names!) and warns others against unwarranted attacks. 
 
I am defending my friends here (amongst whom you yourself take your rightful place as head of the table). 
 
I was annoyed by a recent bit of Hubris from someone or other . . . 
 
'nuff said. 
 
John  
 
Everyone has their place
Written by meadowcroft1964 (100 comments posted) 5th June 2008
Kantanga No matter who belongs the face 
Everyone's entitled to their place 
Some write to reveal,share feeling and heal  
Other's write though they won't reveal 
greatness is what they wish to achieve 
Some of us are really witty  
writing funny ditties  
Pretty words from pens do gush 
From romantics writers like us 
To play judge and jury I'd never rush 
understanding and tollance  
These are the things I push 
Some poems are so high falutin 
in my view  
I don't feel qualified to review  
I may not have the intelligence or learning of some 
But the one thing I learnt respect has to be earned 
So I live and let live  
RESPECT my friend I you give  
With hope I have yours too
Respect!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 5th June 2008
Violet - Thank you so much! 
 
What a review! Pheeeeeeeew! 
 
You've written a whole long poem in response to my feeble effort. 
 
You are so right - I just got cross with someone. 
 
Your review means a lot to me . . . 
 
Cheers! 
 
Love, 
 
John X

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